My graphic story

I’m doing a sort of comic book style thing at the moment and this is a page from it. What do you think?

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10 thoughts on “My graphic story

  1. I like the layout of the page, how the characters seem to jump out of their frames. The story is intriguing, too. I wonder who these people are.

    I look forward to reading the rest of it!

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  2. Yes I like the fact that the usual boxes used in comic strips can be broken out of. I’ve done a few more pages. When I’ve finished I’ll put the complete story on a separate site and post the address here. Thanks for taking the time to comment.

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  3. It’s very intriguing!

    If you make the story long enough, then you can always self-publish it on Lulu.com. Quite a few people seem to publish comics on there, and it’s a good way of doing it without having to fork out for printing (other than the copies you buy yourself).

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  4. the art’s not really my thing, I’m more into really clean art, but it’s still good. And I agree about the interesting panel composition. It makes all the page feel complete, with all the panels integrated with each other. good stuff.

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